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Post by Truthseeker4449 22nd May 2015, 11:20 pm

So I feel like we should start really working on writing out the lore that binds us together and forms our past, as well as influences our future.

So help make this a collaborative effort that doesn't really require a ton of editing, quote the draft and highlight your changes in red. The next person who comes along quotes your post, removes the red, and then makes their own changes in red. At some point either me or jokool will copy the latest revision and put it on the first post. Please avoid using first person stuff like me or I to avoid confusion.

But before we start actually writing, we should start by outlining! In other words what were the most notable events in our history?

Outline:


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Post by Princess 22nd May 2015, 11:30 pm

Luma would make changes but realizes she probably didn't contribute enough to warrant mention so she waits for other users to edit lore first :I
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Post by Burnin' Bunnies 22nd May 2015, 11:47 pm

also waits to add to the current lore (like Mushrooms). :I
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Post by Truthseeker4449 23rd May 2015, 12:39 am

Oh yes the Mushroom joke should be in there as well.

*puts that in*
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Post by returnofmastercrazyhand 24th May 2015, 4:17 pm

what about our backstories?
like how meow-wow is part dragon, and lief knows EVERY JRPG fighting style known to mankind.
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Post by Truthseeker4449 24th May 2015, 4:29 pm

Hmm... where would that fit in the present outline, or should that be a section off to itself?
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Post by returnofmastercrazyhand 24th May 2015, 4:31 pm

probably a section all to itself.
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Post by Truthseeker4449 24th May 2015, 4:42 pm

Okay so what I've done is list as many important people I can think off and I'm going to let you guys write your own bios (or others can write bios for them, I don't really care). Remember this is only an outline so keep the details brief.
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Post by Lief Katano 24th May 2015, 4:48 pm

you forgot to add "OP as shit" for you
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Post by Princess 24th May 2015, 9:59 pm

You should include something about how shippings are a near requirement for all members and how it is almost comparable to oxygen in how vital it is for pit stoppers.

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Post by Burnin' Bunnies 24th May 2015, 10:03 pm

Add this to Snazz's bio please: The Snazz Overlord of Snazzlandia, which may or may not be a rainbow planet full of the Sith.
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Post by Nopon 24th May 2015, 10:47 pm

My bio is too long but I'll simplify it as much as I can

Lux: Emote(a being from Somnia, land of dreams) who was apparently sent to the Pit Stop to power the giant lightbulb sun(recently revealed). Was a cool guy for a while then became evil, then died, then reborn as a new emote also named Lux who got old Lux's old job. Shapeshifts into adorable stuff for some reason (mainly shinx and nopon)
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Post by Burnin' Bunnies 24th May 2015, 11:21 pm

My bio: Bunnies was living a boring life when she met Greece. Taking a vacation to Greece's Second home (the Pit Stop), Bunnies was exposed to the shenanigans of this fabulously random realm. She decided to move in after a few weeks and has actively participated since then.
Likes to burn things and swing axes around. Is generally a defensive type player, preferring bows and arrows over melee weapons. Also goes by Solar_Symphony and her irl nickname, Nanna.
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Post by Truthseeker4449 25th May 2015, 1:03 am

I don't have the time to add those now, please remind me like 12 hours.
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Post by Princess 25th May 2015, 1:04 am

Will do. :U
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